雅思老師:這四大類(lèi)作文開(kāi)頭應(yīng)該這么寫(xiě)
是不是很多同學(xué)在面對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候很難下筆,總想用精彩的開(kāi)頭來(lái)吸引考官的注意,卻在,提筆的時(shí)候猶豫不決。那么,一個(gè)好的開(kāi)頭該怎么寫(xiě),才能引起考官們的注意力呢?一篇好的開(kāi)頭,講清楚自己的觀點(diǎn),表明自己的立場(chǎng),就可以給考官們留下深刻的印象。今天張老師就針對(duì)四大類(lèi)作文的類(lèi)型,講一下它們開(kāi)頭的寫(xiě)作技巧。
第一種:觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)型的作文(agree or disagree)
我們通常要把自己的觀點(diǎn)給寫(xiě)出來(lái),要么同意要么反對(duì)。通常這種類(lèi)型的作文觀點(diǎn)只有一個(gè),大家也不必?fù)?dān)心哪個(gè)是正確,哪個(gè)是錯(cuò)誤,只要把自己的,觀點(diǎn)表明,并且加上重要的論據(jù),就會(huì)讓考官對(duì)你另眼相待。那么觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)作文開(kāi)頭該怎么寫(xiě)呢?我們一起看下這個(gè)例子。
Task:The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader,to what extent do you think?
開(kāi)頭:It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also eligible to take important positions in today’s world.
簡(jiǎn)單兩三句話,就可以表明自己的立場(chǎng),其實(shí)很多同學(xué)在看到這個(gè)題目的時(shí)候,都會(huì)覺(jué)得好難,該怎么寫(xiě)?其實(shí)也沒(méi)有你想的那么難,表明自己的立場(chǎng),下文羅列出自己的依據(jù),這篇作文就已經(jīng)很好了。
第二種:討論類(lèi)的作文題目(discuss both views and give your own opinion)
這類(lèi)作文題目通常就是來(lái)探討兩方的觀點(diǎn),然后表明自己的立場(chǎng)。開(kāi)頭就也是需要先交代一下背景,然后再陳述一下雙方的觀點(diǎn),不需要陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。我們一起來(lái)分析一下這篇作文。
例如: Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is a good thing while other people think it cannot be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
在首段中,我們要寫(xiě)出三個(gè)部分,分別是:Lead-in sentence (引入現(xiàn)象/話題),Public opinion(轉(zhuǎn)述題目中的觀點(diǎn)),Thesis statement(文章中心思想)
第三種:優(yōu)劣勢(shì)類(lèi)作文題目(advantages outweigh the disadvantages)
通常這種題目是給出一個(gè)背景,讓考生自己分析,他們發(fā)展下去的,優(yōu)勢(shì)或者劣勢(shì)。其實(shí)這類(lèi)作文不用刻意的去交代背景,只要,考生可以自己分析出來(lái),是優(yōu)勢(shì)大于劣勢(shì),還是劣勢(shì)大于優(yōu)勢(shì)。然后后面就可以拿出自己依據(jù),開(kāi)頭簡(jiǎn)單明了,只需要一句話可以表達(dá)清楚意思即可,給大家推薦一些萬(wàn)能句式:
例如:
In my opinion, the positive effects are greater than the negative ones.
I think there are more advantages than disadvantages.
From my perspective, although there are some drawbacks, the influence can also be beneficial in many cases.
總結(jié)一下,上面三句話的核心意思就是想告訴大家碰到利大于弊這種類(lèi)型的題目,一定要在開(kāi)頭觀點(diǎn)部分把它表達(dá)清楚,千萬(wàn)不能有模棱兩可的情況,不然task response這一塊分?jǐn)?shù)就會(huì)減少。
第四種:報(bào)告類(lèi)型的作文題目(why and solution)
這類(lèi)作類(lèi)型跟上面優(yōu)越是作文題目相差無(wú)幾,開(kāi)頭只是需要,你對(duì)題目進(jìn)行改寫(xiě)或者多一點(diǎn)延伸,說(shuō)的直白一點(diǎn)就是擴(kuò)展一下句型。之后文章中就多一些數(shù)據(jù),論據(jù),還有表格,讓文章整體有血有肉就可以。我們可以一起來(lái)寫(xiě)一下這篇文章。
例如:題目:Many young people nowadays leave schools with negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen?(原因) What do you think would encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
開(kāi)頭段1. In present-day society, there seems to be a worrying trend that young students hold a negative attitude towards study after graduation. (第一個(gè)句子描述事件,作為背景句;由于報(bào)告類(lèi)題目中一定會(huì)描述事件,只需改造題目即可,方法同辯論類(lèi)一樣) 2. The focus of this essay is to provide some of the most common causes and suggest possible solutions (這個(gè)句子過(guò)于模版,最好不好;即,只寫(xiě)第一句做報(bào)告類(lèi)開(kāi)頭段即可)
這些就是張老師給大家?guī)?lái)雅思寫(xiě)作的小技巧,希望對(duì)你的寫(xiě)作會(huì)有所幫助。詞匯量是雅思寫(xiě)作的基礎(chǔ),平時(shí)要多重視對(duì)詞匯量的積累,另外也要多學(xué)一些語(yǔ)法,寫(xiě)作也是比較考驗(yàn)語(yǔ)法水平。你的語(yǔ)法水平很好,會(huì)為你的文章加分的哦!各位同學(xué)有什么雅思寫(xiě)作的小技巧,歡迎留言評(píng)論,我們一起探討。