雅思老師:這四大類作文開頭應(yīng)該這么寫
是不是很多同學在面對雅思寫作的時候很難下筆,總想用精彩的開頭來吸引考官的注意,卻在,提筆的時候猶豫不決。那么,一個好的開頭該怎么寫,才能引起考官們的注意力呢?一篇好的開頭,講清楚自己的觀點,表明自己的立場,就可以給考官們留下深刻的印象。今天張老師就針對四大類作文的類型,講一下它們開頭的寫作技巧。
第一種:觀點類型的作文(agree or disagree)
我們通常要把自己的觀點給寫出來,要么同意要么反對。通常這種類型的作文觀點只有一個,大家也不必擔心哪個是正確,哪個是錯誤,只要把自己的,觀點表明,并且加上重要的論據(jù),就會讓考官對你另眼相待。那么觀點類作文開頭該怎么寫呢?我們一起看下這個例子。
Task:The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader,to what extent do you think?
開頭:It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also eligible to take important positions in today’s world.
簡單兩三句話,就可以表明自己的立場,其實很多同學在看到這個題目的時候,都會覺得好難,該怎么寫?其實也沒有你想的那么難,表明自己的立場,下文羅列出自己的依據(jù),這篇作文就已經(jīng)很好了。
第二種:討論類的作文題目(discuss both views and give your own opinion)
這類作文題目通常就是來探討兩方的觀點,然后表明自己的立場。開頭就也是需要先交代一下背景,然后再陳述一下雙方的觀點,不需要陳述自己的觀點。我們一起來分析一下這篇作文。
例如: Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is a good thing while other people think it cannot be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
在首段中,我們要寫出三個部分,分別是:Lead-in sentence (引入現(xiàn)象/話題),Public opinion(轉(zhuǎn)述題目中的觀點),Thesis statement(文章中心思想)
第三種:優(yōu)劣勢類作文題目(advantages outweigh the disadvantages)
通常這種題目是給出一個背景,讓考生自己分析,他們發(fā)展下去的,優(yōu)勢或者劣勢。其實這類作文不用刻意的去交代背景,只要,考生可以自己分析出來,是優(yōu)勢大于劣勢,還是劣勢大于優(yōu)勢。然后后面就可以拿出自己依據(jù),開頭簡單明了,只需要一句話可以表達清楚意思即可,給大家推薦一些萬能句式:
例如:
In my opinion, the positive effects are greater than the negative ones.
I think there are more advantages than disadvantages.
From my perspective, although there are some drawbacks, the influence can also be beneficial in many cases.
總結(jié)一下,上面三句話的核心意思就是想告訴大家碰到利大于弊這種類型的題目,一定要在開頭觀點部分把它表達清楚,千萬不能有模棱兩可的情況,不然task response這一塊分數(shù)就會減少。
第四種:報告類型的作文題目(why and solution)
這類作類型跟上面優(yōu)越是作文題目相差無幾,開頭只是需要,你對題目進行改寫或者多一點延伸,說的直白一點就是擴展一下句型。之后文章中就多一些數(shù)據(jù),論據(jù),還有表格,讓文章整體有血有肉就可以。我們可以一起來寫一下這篇文章。
例如:題目:Many young people nowadays leave schools with negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen?(原因) What do you think would encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
開頭段1. In present-day society, there seems to be a worrying trend that young students hold a negative attitude towards study after graduation. (第一個句子描述事件,作為背景句;由于報告類題目中一定會描述事件,只需改造題目即可,方法同辯論類一樣) 2. The focus of this essay is to provide some of the most common causes and suggest possible solutions (這個句子過于模版,最好不好;即,只寫第一句做報告類開頭段即可)
這些就是張老師給大家?guī)硌潘紝懽鞯男〖记桑M麑δ愕膶懽鲿兴鶐椭?。詞匯量是雅思寫作的基礎(chǔ),平時要多重視對詞匯量的積累,另外也要多學一些語法,寫作也是比較考驗語法水平。你的語法水平很好,會為你的文章加分的哦!各位同學有什么雅思寫作的小技巧,歡迎留言評論,我們一起探討。