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高職院校傳統(tǒng)金工實訓(xùn)教學(xué)存在的問題及改革措施 Problems in the traditional metalworking practical training and teaching in Vocational Schools and the relevant reform measures (my suggestion: add "relevant" ) 本文分析了傳統(tǒng)金工實訓(xùn)教學(xué)存在的問題，提出了改革金工實訓(xùn)教學(xué)的幾條措施。 The problems in the traditional metalworking practical training and teaching are analyzed, and several relevant reform measures are proposed in this paper. (my suggestion: replace the "several" with "specific number" according to your whole article, because in the abstract section of a assey, you should give the complete and specific result; one more suggestion, we usually use passive voice instead of positive voice) 高素質(zhì)人才；金工實訓(xùn)；教學(xué)改革；機遇；措施 High-quality talent; metalworking practical training ; educational reform; chances; measures